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I saw you again
After so long,
Still it seems like
It was just yesterday.

I studied you there
Standing in the sun
Sparkles dancing
In your eyes.

Then I looked long
at my love
Studying features
I know so well.

Rembered passion
Rose in my mind
A kaliedoscope
Of moonlit images.

Our fiery passion
Cannot touch this
Fragile blooming love
Growing in my heart.

Your love was simply
A shooting star
Brighter than fire
Shorter than imagined.

As I smiled and
I said goodbye
To my past - I turned
Towards my future.
©2009 ~Intrinsica
:iconintrinsica:

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Forgive this peice. It's to get over my writers block.

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:iconlincava:
Trin -

Never, but never, apologize for your writing. It's is YOUR writing. Anyone doesn't like it, they can pretty much Stuff It.
This is lovely, reaching out gently, simply, tentatively. It rings of truth, and looks to a new day.

Best,
Lin

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Member of Apophysis fractal art community. =Apophysis

Poetry - [link]
:iconmeeden:
sweetness in words! wonderful :butterfly:
:iconblack-roses-fall:
Yuh huh.

That's about how it was.

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:icongrifan526:
Wonderful piece, it is a beautiful display of emotion.

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you can't have the mountains without the valleys
:iconamuris:
" Anyone doesn't like it, they can pretty much Stuff It."
:lol: Sweet.

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:work:
“If inspiration you seek, find it within your heart, within your soul... Not your mind. What you see, what you write, will become real!”
“Until such a time as I may pass this way again... Fairwell.” - Leo Fox
:love: ~autumn4whispers
:iconamuris:
:P Writer's block?
Nay... does not appear so. :no:
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:work:
“If inspiration you seek, find it within your heart, within your soul... Not your mind. What you see, what you write, will become real!”
“Until such a time as I may pass this way again... Fairwell.” - Leo Fox
:love: ~autumn4whispers
:iconlincava:
Yep, well, pretty much.
Lin

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Member of Apophysis fractal art community. =Apophysis

Poetry - [link]
:iconshadow-of-a-whisper:
I'd have to agree with some of the others - Don't apologise, that's a damn fine piece.
Encore.

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I am one of the few people who fight for truth, justice, all good things in life, etc. We are not loved, we are not repected, no one cares. We aren't the shining white knights thats everyone wants us to be, simply because you don't want us.
:iconintrinsica:
Thank you Nic my dear.

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