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In My Thoughts - For Lin by ~Intrinsica:iconIntrinsica:



You've been in my thoughts -
And I could not figure out why -
For the truth of the matter is,
I barely even know you...

But at odd moments of the day
I find myself wondering
How you are coping,
Wondering if you are ok...

And my only contact with you
Is through this keyboard,
Twenty-six letters - All I have
To show my concern.

Each keystroke carefully measured
Like the listened-to beating
Of a watched child's heart -
Sometimes labourous and painful.

I feel in my bones
The weight of this caring -
And I wonder what good
Could possibly come of it...?

But you too, offer ME hope
Some small comfort for my care
When I see your digital "smile"
The knowledge you are well...

I realise this web of contacts
That I have so contrived -
So delicately woven,
Serves a purpose after all...

You offer me thanks for my care -
Now I offer you MY thanks,
For the acceptance of my care -
To know my thoughts, are not pointless...
©2007-2009 ~Intrinsica
:iconintrinsica:

Author's Comments

To Lin Cava, and Nick....You are often in my thoughts

Fare Thee Well, my friends.

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:iconeffamay:
I can relate to this so much... I've been through something rather similar recently.

Well written, as always! :D

:hug:

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Dum spiro spero.
:iconintrinsica:
Ty hun. :) Your comments mean a lot to me !
:iconeffamay:
As always, you are very welcome )

--
Dum spiro spero.
:iconferelwing:
Beautiful! :hug: Simply beautiful!

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******:floating: Li :floating:*******

****:meditate: *Oogway: Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. That is why it is called the present. ":meditate:***
:iconlincava:
Trin,
If you check in from time to time, contact me. I love this work. It meant a lot to me when you wrote it and little Nick was battling for his life. It means a lot now.
I miss you - saw you had some problems with someone hacking here. I've checked in at the other site, too. It would be great to know you are doing well.
Lin

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Member of Apophysis fractal art community. =Apophysis

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